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   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-11-02
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  2021.11.2 Q. Should the malaria vaccine be mandatory? A. Yes because it is safe to use and many people died due to malaria virus. 영작숙제 - 체온을 재어 보자. 그래, 너 감기에 걸렸구나. Let's check body temperature. Oh, you caught a cold. - 넌 주사를 맞아야겠다. You have to get an injection. - 의사선생님, 저 이제 다 나았어요. 엄마, 집에 가요! Doctor, I recover now. Mom, let's go home!
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2021.11.2

Q. Should the malaria vaccine be mandatory?

A. Yes because it is safe to use and many people died due to malaria virus.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

A: Yes, because it is safe to use. Also, many people died due to malaria virus. 

영작숙제

- 체온을 재어 보자. 그래, 너 감기에 걸렸구나.

Let's check body temperature. Oh, you caught a cold. => Let me take your temperature. Yes, you have a cold. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

- 넌 주사를 맞아야겠다.

You have to get an injection. =>​ You have to get a shot. 

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

- 의사선생님, 저 이제 다 나았어요. 엄마, 집에 가요!

Doctor, I am recovering now. Mom, let's go home! =>​ Oh, doctor, I'm better now. Mom, let's go home!

=> This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.