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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-11-04
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  A. What do you do with clothes that you no longer wear? I tend not ot discard clothes, even I no longer wear. It'd be better to contribute to the person who is good in that or I try to sell it on the online used market. So, I need to dispose of old clothes B. Make these sentences into English. (11/04/21) -지금 돈이 궁하거든. I am in meed of money right now. -너 나한테 반했어, 그렇지? Did you fall in love, didn't you? -그 친구 그렇게 안 보이던데 배짱이 보통이 아니던 걸. He didn't look like that, but his guts weren't normal.
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A. What do you do with clothes that you no longer wear?

-> I tend not to discard clothes, even if I no longer wear them. It'd be better to give the clothes to someone who can still wear them or I try to sell them online.  But I need to dispose the old clothes.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

I rarely throw away clothes, even if I no longer wear them.

It would be preferable to give the clothes to someone who can still wear them, or to try to sell them online. But I need to get rid of the old clothes.

=>These are other ways of saying them.

 

 B. Make these sentences into English.

 (11/04/21)

-지금 돈이 궁하거든.

I am in need of money right now. -> I'm strapped for cash at the moment.

=> Corrected spelling.

- 나한테 반했어, 그렇지?

Did you fall in love, didn't you? -> You’ve fallen head over heels for me, haven’t you?

- 친구 그렇게 보이던데 배짱이 보통이 아니던 .

He didn't look like that, but his guts weren't normal. -> That guy may not look it but he really has guts.

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them.