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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-11-15
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  HOMEWORK: A. Who do you wish you could get back into contact with? I would like to contact with one of my best friends in my high school days. There was a trivial problem and began breaking up with her. I seemd to be disappointed with her at that time because she didn't try to rebuild up the relationship between us. Looking back on my past, I also had a minor mistake and should have tried to understand her situation. Anyway, I hope she is getting better mentally and heathily. B. Make these sentences into English. (11/12/21) -우리 사장님은 통이 크신 분이야. My boss is very generous. -그냥 집에 틀어박혀 있을 거 같아. I guess I just stay at home. -전화는 폼으로 들고 다녀? Do you carry around your phone?
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HOMEWORK:

A. Who do you wish you could get back into contact with?

I would like to have a contact with one of my best friends in my high school days.

There was a trivial problem and began breaking up with her.

I seemed to be disappointed with her at that time because she didn't try to rebuild the relationship between us.

Looking back on my past, I also had a minor mistake and should have tried to understand her situation.

Anyway, I hope she is getting better mentally and physically.

=> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

=> Corrected spelling.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/12/21)

-우리 사장님은 통이 크신 분이야.

My boss is very generous. ->The boss is pretty broad-minded.

 

-그냥 집에 틀어박혀 있을 같아.

I guess I just stay at home. -> I'll probably just be cooped up at home.

 

-전화는 폼으로 들고 다녀?

Do you carry around your phone? -> Do you carry around your phone just for looks?

=> Another way: Your sentences are okay and these are other ways of saying them.