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   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2021-11-15
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  HOMEWORK: A. Please make two sentences using the word "escape". => I escaped from the South Pole. =>You can escape that room. B. Make these sentences into English. (11/12/21) - 무슨 일이니? What's happening? - 우리가 축구 경기에서 졌어요. 그래서 좀 화났어요. We lose at soccer game. So I was little angry. - 안 됐구나. That's bad.
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HOMEWORK:

A. Please make two sentences using the word "escape".

 

=> I escaped from the South Pole.  ✔  

 

=>You can escape that room. ✔  

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/12/21)

- 무슨 일이니? What's happening?

  => What's wrong?​

 => This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.   

 

- 우리가 축구 경기에서 졌어요. 그래서 좀 화났어요. We lose at soccer game. So I was little angry.

  => We lost the soccer game. So I'm upset.

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.     

 

- 안 됐구나. That's bad.

  => That's too bad.​

  => Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.    ​