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   제 목   Today is Nov. 16th, Tuesday.    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-11-16
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  A. Write an example of a birthday invitation. Dear, Tae gyu I invite you to my Birthday Party. It'll be my house. It's on July 21st, at 6:00 P.M. If you want to join, call to me. My phone is OOOO-OOOO. Love, OOO (I have to decorate but I can't in here.) B. Make these sentences into English. (11/16/21) -놀랍다. 안녕, 몽아! I'm surprising. Hello, Mong! -몽이는 바나나를 매우 좋아해. Mong loves banana much. -약간의 물이 있어. There's a little water.
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A. Write an example of a birthday invitation.

Dear, Tae gyu

I invite you to my Birthday Party.

It'll be my house.

It's on July 21st, at 6:00 P.M.

If you want to join, call to me. My phone is OOOO-OOOO.

                                                                           Love, OOO

(I have to decorate but I can't in here.)

Dear, Tae gyu

Corrected: I'm inviting you to my Birthday Party. ( The sentence is corrected grammatically)

Corrected: It'll be at my house. ( The sentence is corrected grammatically)​

 

It's on July 21st, at 6:00 P.M.

Corrected: If you want to join, call me. My phone is OOOO-OOOO. ( The sentence is corrected grammatically)​

 

                                                                           Love, OOO

Corrected: (I have to decorate but I can't in here.)​ ( I want to decorate, but I can't do it)  ( The sentence is corrected grammatically)​

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/16/21)

-놀랍다. 안녕, 몽아!

I'm surprising. Hello, Mong! 

-몽이는 바나나를 매우 좋아해.

Mong loves banana so much.

-약간의 물이 있어.

There's a little water.​  

Thank you for doing your homework Tae Gyu. Keep it up!