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   제 목   04/21/21)    상 태  
   교정강사   Kristina(C)    등록일   2021-04-21
   작성내용
  -Are there many beautiful beaches in your country? Which is your favorite? Tell me about it. -No... there aren't many, but I like the sea. It's... Udo Coral Beach in Udo! I like it because the sea is emerald colored. https://www.google.com/search?q=%EC%A0%9C%EC%A3%BC%EB%8F%84%EC%9D%98+%EB%B0%94%EB%8B%A4&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjz4PzOso_wAhUUZt4KHcsoCL8Q_AUoAXoECAEQAw&biw=936&bih=500 (04/21/21) -04/21/21) -what? at there! -Oh no! -Look at that, there's an elephant!
   교정내용
  -Are there many beautiful beaches in your country? Which is your favorite? Tell me about it.
  -No... there aren't many, but I like the sea. It's... Udo Coral Beach in Udo! I like it because the sea is emerald colored.
​ *No, there aren't. I like the sea called Udo Coral Beach. I like it because the its water is emerald-colored.

~> Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

(04/21/21)

-뭐라고? 거기 서! -what? at there! *What? Stop there!

~> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-오,싫어요! -Oh no! 

-저것 봐, 코끼리가 있어! -Look at that, there's an elephant! *Look! There's an elephant. 

~>This sentence is okay. This is another way of saying it.

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Hi, Darling! Thank you for showing me your favorite beach! I purple you!