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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-11-25
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  A. Describe yourself. Hello. My name is taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes. B. Make these sentences into English. (11/25/21) -치즈 케이크는 얼마나 드릴까요? How many pieces of cheese cake do you want? -한 조각만 주세요. I want one piece of cheese cake. -그리고 커피 두잔 주세요. And two cup of coffee, too.
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A. Describe yourself.

Hello. My name is taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes.

Corrected: Hello! My name is Taegyu. I'm 12 years old. I have straight black hair and black eyes.​ ( This is much better. )

 

 B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/25/21)

-치즈 케이크는 얼마나 드릴까요?

How many pieces of cheese cake do you want? 

-한 조각만 주세요.

I want one piece of cheese cake. 

-그리고 커피 두잔 주세요.

And two cup of coffee, too.​ 

Corrected: And two cups of coffee, too.​ ​ The sentence is corrected grammatically.