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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-22
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  I feel blue after playing table tennis at night. That's because I feel pain on my right knee. As you know I really like table tennis and it is my only happiness in a day. Well, I am getting old so I have to admit it. Actually, the club members who are older than me wear the bandage on their knees. They said that they bought the bandage for knee in the pharm. I searched for that on the internet last night. There were so many kind of bandages and their price varies based on brand names. I couldn't choose which one is good for me. In the middle of that, some idea hit me. I bought the bandage for my ankel a long time ago. So I found it in the closet and wrapped my knee with that. It was a little bit short but it was good, though. I didn't need to spend money for that. Bye
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I felt blue after playing table tennis at night. That's because I felt pain on my right knee. As you know I really like table tennis and it is my only happiness. Well, I am getting old, so I have to admit it. Actually, the club members who are older than me wear bandages on their knees. They said that they bought the bandages for the knee in the pharmacy store. I searched for that on the internet last night. There were so many kinds of bandages and their price varies based on brand names. I couldn't choose which one is good for me. In the middle of that, some idea hit me. I bought the bandage for my ankle a long time ago. So, I found it in the closet and wrapped it on my knee. It was a little bit short but it was good, though. I didn't need to spend money for that. Bye​