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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-11-30
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  A. Do you like playing in the rain? Why or why not? No, I don't. Because I don't want to wet. Also I saw the news that says the rain has acid a little. B. Make these sentences into English. (11/30/21) -나는 케이크 한 조각을 원해요. I want one piece of cake. -너 뭐 하고 있니? What are you doing? -내 동생, 심지한테 노래 불러 주고 있어. I'm singing a song to my brother, Simji.
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A. Do you like playing in the rain? Why or why not?

No, I don't. Because I don't want to wet. Also I saw the news that says the rain has acid a little.

Corrected: No, I don't. Because I don't want to get wet. Also, I saw in the news that there's an acid rain. ( The sentence is corrected grammatically.)

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(11/30/21)

-나는 케이크 한 조각을 원해요.

I want one piece of cake.✔

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-너 뭐 하고 있니?

What are you doing?✔

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-내 동생, 심지한테 노래 불러 주고 있어.

I'm singing a song to my brother, Simji.✔

Thank you so for doing your homework Tae Gyu,, Keep it up!

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