아이디   비밀번호  

영작교정(첨삭)

  • home  Home>
  • 마이페이지>
  • 나의 수업관리>
  • 영작교정(첨삭)
   제 목   Book Review 1    상 태  
   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2021-12-01
   작성내용
  It was a very nice Firday for Gerenimo. Suddenly, the phone rang, it was Geronimo's grumpy grandpa. He told him to get ready for the a grand opening! He hed only one week to get ready. Luckly, Geronimo's hard work half paid off! He managed to get ready for the grand opening. He was so~ tired, he fell asleep right away in the bed. Suddenly, Gennimo's friend rainbow dragon was here!
   교정내용
 

It was a very nice Friday for Geronimo. Suddenly, the phone rang, it was Geronimo's grumpy grandpa. He told him to get ready for the grand opening! He had only a week to prepare. Luckily, Geronimo's hard work have paid off! He managed to get ready for the grand opening. He was so tired, he fell asleep right away in the bed. Suddenly, Geronimo's friend rainbow dragon arrived! 


=> Corrected vocabulary.