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   제 목   Book Review 3    상 태  
   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2021-12-01
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  I thought about peace. And no war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there were peace every time. But it isn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace, I thought it could at least be peacetul than ever. I will try to make peace by, trying not to fight with my little sister.
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  I thought about peace. And no war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there were peace every time. But it isn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace,  I thought it could  at least be peacetul than ever. I will try to make peace by, trying not to fight with my little sister.

 

 

 

I thought about peace. No war, no worries would be great for everyone. I wish there was peace all the time. But there wasn't...however, I thought we could try to make peace, I thought it could at least be peaceful than ever. I will try to make peace by trying to be friendly with my little sister.

 

=> Corrected vocabulary.