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   제 목   Should all countries be multi-party democracies?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-12-01
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  A.) Should all countries be multi-party democracies? Please elaborate your answer. The more political parties are, the more diverse opinions can be expressed. It would be idealistic that all countries are multi-party democracies. B.) Make these sentences into English. (11/29/21) -내 가족은 제사를 지내고 있어. My family performs ancestral rites. -내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아. You know that I am always blunt. -헛수고 했네. I went to waste.
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A.) Should all countries be multi-party democracies? Please elaborate your answer.

 

  The  more political parties are, the more diverse opinions  can be expressed.

  It  would be idealistic  that  all countries  are multi-party democracies.

 

=> The more political parties are, the more diverse opinions can be expressed. It would be ideal that all countries are multi-party democracies.

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/29/21)

 

-내 가족은 제사를 지내고 있어.

 My family  performs ancestral rites.  

-내가 항상 직설적으로 말하는 거 알잖아.

You know that  I am always  blunt. 

-헛수고 했네.

I went to waste.

=> What a waste of time.

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. ​