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   제 목   The dragon of fortune    상 태  
   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2021-12-08
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  When Geronimo went outside, everything seems wrong! It smelled bad, and clouds were all covering the sky!! And everyone looked unhappy and sleeply! It was very weird. Suddenly, on owl that is big came into Geromimo's house! Their were his friends, scribblehopper and blue rider. They said to get the winged ring, Geronimo got from last adventure, but it wasn't there! Someone has stolen it! So they had to go to kingdom of fantasy again. When he went, Blossom told him that the winged ring is very important, without it, witch can use it for a dangerous plan, judges told him to find winged ring for 1 moth. If not, Blossem won't be a queen.
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When Geronimo went outside, everything seemed wrong! It smelled bad, and clouds were all covering the sky!! Everyone looked unhappy and sleepy! It was very weird. Suddenly, a big owl came into Geronimo's house!  They were his friends, scribble hopper and blue rider. They said to get the winged ring that Geronimo got from the last adventure, but it wasn't there! Someone has stolen it! So they had to go to kingdom of fantasy again. When he arrived, Blossom told him that the winged ring ​was very important, witch could use it for a dangerous plan, judges told him to find the winged ring for 1 month. If not, Blossom won't be a queen.

 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.