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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-23
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  I heard the frogs singing in the pond last night. There is a small pond in front of Seoul science museum near my apartment. When we moved into this apartment, we were surprised at frogs singing at night. We could hear the natural singing in this city, Seoul. So, I checked out where they live. They are singing at this time of the year. I was very happy with that. That's because it reminds me of my hometown. When I went to the field at night, I could hear them singing. Their songs were noisy, but very beauiful. Now I live in city, and can hear the song. I am lucky. I want to write a poem about the song. Sometimes, when I hear the song, I miss my mom living alone in my hometown. Bye
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I heard the frogs singing in the pond last night. There is a small pond in front of the Seoul science museum near my apartment. When we moved into this apartment, we were surprised to hear some frogs singing at night. We could hear it in this city, Seoul. So, I checked where they live. They are singing at this time of the year. I was very happy with that. That's because it reminds me of my hometown. When I went to the field at night, I could hear them singing. Their songs were noisy, but very beautiful. Now I live in the city, and can hear the song. I am lucky. I want to write a poem about the song. Sometimes, when I hear the song, I miss my mom who is living 

alone in my hometown. Bye