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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-12-11
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  A.) Will the British Museum ever return the marbles? Please elaborate your answer. The Parthenon marbles were illegally taken to the Britain, So they must be returned to the Acropolis in Athens. That is what I want to answer to the question. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/08/21) -이 경기 손에 땀을 쥐게 하네. This game is so exciting. -그는 입이 가벼워. He doesn't keep secret. -그는 입이 거칠어. He has a foul mouth.
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A.) Will the British Museum ever return the marbles? Please elaborate your answer.

 

The Parthenon marbles were illegally taken to the Britain,

So they must be returned to the Acropolis in Athens.

That is what I want to answer to the question.

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

​=> The Parthenon marbles were illegally taken to Britain​. So they must be returned to the Acropolis in Athens.

That is what I want to answer to the question.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/08/21)

 

-이 경기 손에 땀을 쥐게 하네.

This game is so exciting.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> This game is keeping me on the edge of my seat.


-그는 입이 가벼워.

 He doesn't keep secret.

=>  He doesn't keep secrets.​

 

OR

=> He has a big mouth.


-그는 입이 거칠어.

He has a foul mouth. 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.