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   제 목   Book report 1_2    상 태  
   교정강사   Nor(D)    등록일   2021-12-16
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  When they almost when to the top of the Fiery Abess, Geronimo had a пар. Suddenly, Scribblehopper said all his friend betrayed him! However Geronimo find out Scribblehopper was Webula! Wither's sevent. But by help with Geronimo's friend, he defeated her and found winglet. MY THOUGHT I thought love is nice thing. Like, pets will be happy because we love them and we try to take good care of them, and our parents taking care of us. We won't be happy without рerson you love. Like our family. Thank you~Teacher♡
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I believed that showing LOVE is a beautiful thing. For instance, taking good care of our pets is one way of showing our love to them which makes them happy, in return, pets bring so much love and laughter in our lives. And of course, our PARENTS, who's always been there to take care of us. We are happy knowing that, we are loved by the person that we loved, and that's our FAMILY. 

 

You're Welcome Zuri! ♡ ^_^