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BOOK REPORT 1_1 |
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Jaylou(C) |
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2021-12-22 |
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Geronimo didn't had any idea for his story, so he rested. Because he thought resting would give him an idea. Suddenly, a magical thing flew and took Geronimo to the kingdom of Fantasy, he was in the beach. And his friend, Chatterclaws told Geranimo that they need to find 7 Charm, the first one was in Coraline's place. So Geronimo went and met Coraline she gave him the first charm, the coral heart. They went to the Desert of eyes and ears to find the Clasping hands, Chatterclaws said there're spies everywhere so they need to be careful. They also met some monsters but luckliy, they escaped, and met guardian it had the clasping heads !
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Geronimo didn't have any idea about the story, so he rested. He thought resting would give him an idea. Suddenly, a magical thing flew and took Geronimo to the kingdom of Fantasy, he was at the beach. His friend, Chatter claws told Geronimo that they need to find 7 Charm, the first one was in Coraline's place. So Geronimo went there and met Coraline, she gave him the first charm, the coral heart. They went to the Desert of eyes and ears to find the Clasping hands, Chatter claws said there were spies everywhere so they needed to be careful. They also met some monsters but luckily, they escaped, and met the guardian it had the clasping heads ! =>
Corrected : The sentence are corrected grammatically.
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