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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-24
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  My husband and I walked around the mountain near my place. We often go there on the weekend. We stopped by the restaurant on the other side of the mountain and had lunch before. But now we bring kimbob and sandwiches for lunch because of COVID19. We sat the bench in the mountain and ate them. I really wanted to have a cup of coffee. My husband said to me, "Stop having a coffee just like me and you can totally free from cafein. " Acutally, he really liked a coffee before. As I saw, he was almost addicted to coffee. He used to go to a coffee shop and buy a take-out coffee everyday. When he didn't have coffee on time, he pissed me off. Now he never drinks a coffee. How it could be possible! It has an advantage for him. He falls asleep fast and he can sleep tight. Bye
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My husband and I walked around the mountain near my place. We often go there on weekends. We used to stop by at the restaurant on the other side of the mountain and had lunch before. But now, we bring kimbob and sandwiches for lunch because of COVID-19. We sat on the bench in the mountain and ate them. I really wanted to have a cup of coffee. My husband said to me, "Stop drinking coffee and be like me and you can be totally free from caffeine. " Actually, he really liked coffee before. As I saw, he was almost addicted to coffee. He used to go to a coffee shop and buy coffee to go every day. When he didn't have coffee on time, he got pissed at me.

Now, he never drinks coffee. How could it be possible? It has an advantage for him. He falls asleep fast and he can sleep tight. Bye​