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   교정강사   Nor(D)    등록일   2021-12-23
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  I thought about Bilzzard and Geronimo being friends and in the book, Bilzzard actally looked a bit scary, however she was very nice and friendly. Like this, we could not judge someone (anyone) by their appearance. Some could be really good and kind to me and be a great friend even if it looks scary or weird.
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We couldn't judge people by their looks or appearance. Some people could be really good and kind to us, sometime they can be great friend to us. Others may look scary and weird, but we should always look inside their heart because that's where you will find the real person.