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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-25
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  My husband went to his office and my daughter went to the dormitory. While eating strawbery, I uploaded some comments to the poetry club members' poems on the webpages. When I am alone, I feel loney. I don't know why but as I am getting old, I seem to be weak. When I feel loney, I think of my mom living alone in the countryside. She is a farmer so she is always busy working in the field. She said, when she is loney, she goes to my father's grave and talk to him about everything. My father already passed away 5 years ago but still takes care of my mom. She is stronger than me about emotional stuffs, so I respect her. Anyway, reading and writing poems help me to stay calm and relaxed. Bye
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My husband went to his office and my daughter went to her dormitory. While eating strawberries, I uploaded some comments to the poetry club members on the website / webpage. When I am alone, I feel lonely. I don't know why, but as I get old.  I seem to be weak. When I feel lonely, I think of my mom living who lives alone in the countryside. She is a farmer so she is always busy working in the field. She told me when she is lonely, she goes to my father's grave and talk to him about everything. My father already passed away 5 years ago but he still takes care of my mom. She is stronger than me about emotional stuff, so I respect her. Anyway, reading and writing poems help me to stay calm and relaxed. Bye​