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   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2021-12-24
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  It was a very bad deg for Geronimo.He was late for a conference in Cheddarville, he had freezing shower, caught a button on the doorknob and ripped his jacket, filght was terrible, when be got to conference, it was canceled, lost kegs, the house flooded! Then he slept and suddenly, Scriddlehopper came to him in a silver carriage with lots of unicorns. He said queen Blossom is missing. So Geronimo went to Kingdom of fantasy, he met his friends, Bluerifider and Chattereclaws. They said queen Blossom and the Book of a thousand spells, crystal sphere, and the whispering wand.
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It was a very bad day for Geronimo. He was late for a conference in Cheddarville, he had a cold shower, caught the button on the doorknob and ripped his jacket, flight was terrible, when he arrived at the conference, it was canceled, lost kegs, the house flooded!  Then he slept and suddenly, Scriddlehopper came to him in a silver carriage with lots of unicorns. He said queen Blossom is missing. So Geronimo went to Kingdom of fantasy, he met his friends, Bluerifider and Chatterclaws. They said queen Blossom and the Book of a thousand spells, crystal sphere, and the whispering wand were missing