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  Gerenion was invited to a party, he wes supposed to wear a costume, however 1 costume left, a frog costume. So Geronimo went to the party in the frog costume when, he slipped and fell into the lily pad fountain! It got deeper and deeper and next, he was in kingidom of Fantasy's s sea. And princess melinda, princess of vanilla Fairies was there. She sail queen Blessom needed help, so they went to Blossom's crystal castle. Blassom said Geronimo and Scribblehopper must stop the whopping wizard and get treasure of the golden gnomes, Egg of fire and blue weasels before him. So Geronimo and Scribblehopper left and went to the golden gnomes, but when they got there, the treasure was gone!
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Geronimo was invited to a party, he was supposed to wear a costume, however only 1 costume left, a frog costume. So Geronimo went to the party in the frog costume when, he slipped and fell into the lily pond fountain!  He went deeper and deeper and next thing happened, he  was in kingdom of Fantasy's sea. Princess Melinda, the princess of  vanilla Fairies was there. She said queen Blossom needed help, so they went to Blossom's crystal castle.  Blossom said Geronimo and Scribblehopper must stop the whopping wizard and get the treasure of the golden gnomes, Egg of fire and blue weasels before him. So Geronimo and  Scribblehopper left and went to the golden gnomes, but when they got there, the treasure was already gone!