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   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2021-12-29
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  So, sadly. Geronimo and Scribblehopper want to vertigo peak there was a fire dragon with seven heads! Geronimo got the egg by chowing Blossom's ring however, whopping wizand's assistanrs' stoled it while carrying! So they went to blue weasels' town. One weasel said whopping wizard stoled all of the others so they went to whopping wizard's castle and got all the treasure, then gave it for Blossom. I think this book is about trust, because Blossom trusted Geronimo. I thought about trust and I found out trust is important, without it you can get blamed or you can someone very often. Then the world could be bad and full of angry and bad people. Trust is very important. I guess I need to try goving my listle sister some trust.
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So, sadly. Geronimo and Scribblehopper went to vertigo peak because there was a fire dragon with seven heads! Geronimo got the egg by chowing Blossom's ring however, whopping wizard's assistants' stole it while carrying them! So they went to blue weasels' town. One weasel said whopping wizard stole all of the others so they went to whopping wizard's castle and got all the treasure, then they gave it to Blossom. I think this book is about trust, because Blossom trusted Geronimo. When I thought about trust, I found out that trust is important,  without it you can easily get blame or you can blame someone very often. Then the world would be bad with full of anger and bad people. Trust is very important. I guess I need to try giving my little sister some trust.