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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2021-12-29
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC(2) A. What's your New Year's resolution? Why? My New Year's resolution is more exercising and study more English than this year. Because the first is I wanna have stronger physical strength than this year. And the second cause is I wanna be a English teacher. So I'll study English hard next year. B. Make these sentences into English. (12/29/21) -얄미야, 잠깐만: Wait, Yalmi. -일요일에 뭐할거니?: What are you going to do on Sunday? -조부모님 댁에 갈거야: I'm going to visit my grand parents. (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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A. What's your New Year's resolution? Why?

My New Year's resolution is more exercising and study more English than this year. ----> My New Year's resolution is to exercise ​​and study more English this year ​than ​last year.​

Because the first is I wanna have stronger physical strength than this year. ----> Because first, I wanna have a stronger physical strength this year than​ the last.​

 

And the second cause is I wanna be a English teacher. ----> And the second one is I wanna be an English teacher. ​

 

So I'll study English hard next year. ---> So, I'll study English harder next year.

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(12/29/21)

-얄미야, 잠깐만

Wait, Yalmi. 

 

-일요일에 뭐할거니?

What are you going to do on Sunday? 

 

-조부모님 댁에 갈거야

I'm going to visit my grandparents. 

You're welcome, Sammy! ​