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   제 목   Do you have any New Year's Day resolution?    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2021-12-30
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  A. Do you have any New Year's Day resolution? If yes, tell me about them. Yes, I have some New Year's Day resolutions. First, I will get longer height. Second, I won't be fat. Last, I will be safe from viruses. B. Make these sentences into English. (12/30/21) -그럼 토요일 어떠니? 시험 끝난 후에는 괜찮은데. How about Saturday? I'm fine after test. -그거 좋다! Sounds good! -수학 시험 끝난후/ 토요일 After the math test / Saturday
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A. Do you have any New Year's Day resolution? If yes, tell me about them.

Yes, I have some New Year's Day resolutions.

First, I will get longer height. Second, I won't be fat. Last, I will be safe from viruses.

Corrected: These are better answers:

                 First, I want to get taller.

                 Second, I want to lose weight.

                 Lastly, I want to be safe from viruses.

These are better answers:

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(12/30/21)

-그럼 토요일 어떠니? 시험 끝난 후에는 괜찮은데.

How about Saturday? I'm free after the test.

-그거 좋다!

Sounds good!

-수학 시험 끝난후/ 토요일

After Math test /  On Saturday

Thank you for answering your homework Tae Gyu.. Keep it up and Happy New Year!!!​