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   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2022-01-03
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  Geronimo was looking for candles and flashlight in the attic because the light went out of his house. Then he found a beautiful music box! When he opened it, a small Golden door and a Golden key appeared. So he used the key and opened the door. Inside, there was a talking frog wearing red clothes nemed, Scribblehopper. Scribblehopper said queen Blossom needed help! They needed to pass a lot of land to go to fairy land. First they went to witches land and met cackle, queen of the witches. Scriblehopper thought of a plan to get out of witches land he said, " I change of this plants, let us go to the mermaids land. "The deal worked, cackle needed the plant from Scribblehopper.
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Geronimo was looking for candles and flashlight in the attic because the light went out of his house. He found a beautiful music box! When he opened it, a small Golden door and a Golden key appeared.  So he used the key and opened the door. Inside, there was a talking frog wearing red clothes named, Scribblehopper.  Scribblehopper said queen Blossom needed help!  They needed to pass a lot of land to go to fairy land. First they went to the witches land and met cackle, queen of the witches. Scriblehopper thought of a plan to get out of the witches land he said, " I change of these plants, let us go to the mermaids land". The deal worked, cackle needed the plant from Scribblehopper.