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   제 목   Writing homework(21.4.26)    상 태  
   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-04-26
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  Q; What kinds of things are you saving your money for? A: I usually save money for playing with friends. -이번 토요일.거기서 6일동안 머물거야. This Saturday. I'll stay there for 6 days. -나한테 편지 써줄거지? Will you send letters to me? -물론이지. 너한테 이메일 써줄게. Of course. I'll send you email.
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Q; What kinds of things are you saving your money for?

A: I usually save money for playing with friends. =>  I usually save up so I can play with friends.

 => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

-이번 토요일.거기서 6일동안 머물거야.

This Saturday. I'll stay there for 6 days.  (Correct)

-나한테 편지 써줄거지?

Will you send letters to me? => Can you write me a letter? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-물론이지. 너한테 이메일 써줄게.

Of course. I'll send you email. => Sure. I'll send you an e-mail. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​