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   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2022-01-06
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  HOMEWORK: A. How does climate change affect global warming? It makes the weather harsh so there are high chances to die due to severe weather, and the territories are getting small and small by raising the sea level and some people might lose their house. That means it would be hard to find the safe place and cost a lot to recover from the damage. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/04/21) -저 애는 왜 저렇게 교수님께 아부하는 거야? Why he is flattering to a professor? -우리는 의견도 잘 맞아. We easily come to an agreement. -살다 보면 이럴 때도 있고 저럴 때도 있어. Well, that's the life.
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HOMEWORK:

A. How does climate change affect global warming?

 

It makes the weather harsh, so there are high chances to die due to severe weather, and the territories are getting small and small by raising the 

 

sea level and some people might lose their house.

Corrected: It makes the weather harsh, so there are high chances to die due to severe weather condition, and the territories are getting smaller and smaller by raising of the sea level and some people might lose their homes. ( This is a better way)

 

 

That means it would be hard to find the safe place and cost a lot to recover from the damage.

That means it would be hard to find the safe place and it will cost a lot money to recover from the damages.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/04/21)

-저 애는 왜 저렇게 교수님께 아부하는 거야?

 

Why he is flattering to a professor?

Corrected pattern: Why is he kissing up to the professor like that?

 

-우리는 의견도 잘 맞아.

 

We easily come to an agreement.

 

 

-살다 보면 이럴 때도 있고 저럴 때도 있어.

 

Well, that's the life.​ 

Corrected pattern: Life is always full of ups and downs.