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   제 목   Should the Summit for Democracy be held every year?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-01-09
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  A.)Should the Summit for Democracy be held every year? Please elaborate your answer. I think that the object of the Summit for Democracy is obscure. It would cause complaints of those countries excluded. So it must be considered seriously to keep it held every year. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/03/21) -당신 목이 잠겼네요. You sound hoarse. -몸이 조금 찌뿌드해. I am a little tired. -그 동안의 노력이 수포로 돌아간 거 같습니다. His effort in the interim likely gets in vain.
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A.)Should the Summit for Democracy be held every year? Please elaborate your answer.

 

I think that the object of the Summit for Democracy is obscure.

It would  cause complaints of those countries excluded.

So it must be considered seriously to keep it  held every year.   

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/03/21)

 

-당신 목이 잠겼네요.

 You sound hoarse. 

 

-몸이 조금 찌뿌드해.

 I am a little tired. 

 

-그 동안의 노력이 수포로 돌아간 거 같습니다.

His effort in the interim likely gets in vain.

=> Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> It seems that all your efforts have gone in vain.

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.