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   제 목   Where do you want to go on your next(or this) vacation?    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2022-01-11
   작성내용
  A. Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why? What do you want to do?(Actually I'm in vacation now, so I'll write about this vacation.) I want to go to the frozen river because I want to play on ice such as ice-sledding. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/11/22) -초콜릿을 좋아해요. I like chocolate. -가족은 몇 명이니? How many people does your family have? -네 명요.아빠, 엄마, 언니와 저요. 4 people. Dad, mom, sister, and me.
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A. Where do you want to go on your next vacation? Why? What do you want to do?(Actually I'm in vacation now, so I'll write about this vacation.)

I want to go to the frozen river because I want to play on ice such as ice-sledding. ✔

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B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/11/22)

-초콜릿을 좋아해요.

I like chocolate. ✔

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-가족은 몇 명이니?

How many people does your family have? ✔

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-네 명요.아빠, 엄마, 언니와 저요.

4 people. Dad, mom, sister, and me. ✔

 

WELL DONE TAE GYU.. KEEP IT UP!!! ^-^​