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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-27
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  I was so busy with translation. Well, I can earn money when I work a lot, but I prefer to work a little even though I can't not make much money. I am so exhausted now. So after I make this composion in English I will go to the table tennis club. Actually, I am afraid of getting Corona virus in the club. I stopped playing table tennis for last a few months. I could be safe from virus but I was not happy then. I really needed to do exercise so I just walked around mountain alone. It was loney and it was not funny. I needed friends who hung out with each other and did exercise at the same time. I had swam when I was younger than now for over 10 years. But I was loosing my eyesight because of the water of swim pool. They added some pharm which is harmful to our eyes to clean the water.
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I was so busy with my translation job. / I was so busy translating some documents into English.  Well, I can earn money when I work a lot, but I prefer to work a little even though I can't not earn much money. I am so exhausted now. So, after I make this composition in English. I will go to the table tennis club. Actually, I am afraid of getting Corona virus in the club. I stopped playing table tennis for a few months. I could be safe from the virus, but I was not happy then. I really needed to do exercise so I just walked around the mountain alone. It was lonely and it was not funny. I needed friends who could hang out with me and did exercise at the same time. I swam when I was younger for over 10 years. But I was losing my eyesight because of the water in the swim pool. They added some chemicals / substances which are harmful to our eyes. So, I need clean water for my eyes.