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   제 목   Should the Corinth Canal be widened?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-01-15
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  A.) Should the Corinth Canal be widened? Please elaborate your answer. The Corinth Canal saves 700 km of journey. But its width is just 24.5 meters, which is so narrow that big ships can't pass through it. So it should be widened unless it deteriorates the environment. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/14/22) -뿌린 대로 거두는 법이니까요. We all reap what we sow. -서두르면 일을 그르치게 돼요. Haste makes waste. -세 살 버릇 여든 간다. What is learned in the cradle is carried to the tomb.
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A.) Should the Corinth Canal be widened? Please elaborate your answer.

 

The Corinth Canal saves 700 km of journey.

But its width is just 24.5 meters, which is so narrow that big ships can't pass through it.

So it should be widened unless it deteriorates the environment.

 

=> The Corinth Canal saves 700 km the journey. But its width is just 24.5 meters, which is so narrow that big ships can't pass through it.

So it should be widened unless it deteriorates the environment.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/14/22)

 

-뿌린 대로 거두는 법이니까요.

 We all reap what we sow. 

 

-서두르면 일을 그르치게 돼요.

 Haste makes waste.  

 

-세 살 버릇 여든 간다.

What is learned in the cradle is carried to the tomb.  

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.