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   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2022-01-19
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  Rachel and Kirsty was waiting for mom and dad to come and take them home. And they felt something would be wrong today in the Fairgland. So they used their last pinch of falry dust to find the last jewel for the queen, the last jewel was diamond. They threw the last pinch of fairy dust around them and went to fairyland. As always when they came in Fairyland, their wings appeared on their backs. They were at a huge tree. After a few second, they met the queen and king fairy and other jewel fairies they met on their last trip to the fairyland. Bue then, Rachel found out the fairies didn have their wings because the diemond was missing.
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Rachel and Kirsty was waiting for their mom and dad to come and take them home. They felt something could be wrong today in the Fairyland. So they used their last pinch of fairy dust to find the last jewel for the queen, the last jewel was a diamond. They threw the last pinch of fairy dust around them and went to the fairyland. As always when they came in Fairyland, their wings appeared on their backs. They were at a huge tree. After a few second, they met the queen and king fairy and other jewel fairies they met on their last trip to the fairyland. But then, Rachel found out the fairies didn't have their wings because the diamond was missing.