아이디   비밀번호  

영작교정(첨삭)

  • home  Home>
  • 마이페이지>
  • 나의 수업관리>
  • 영작교정(첨삭)
   제 목   Book report 1_2    상 태  
   교정강사   Jaylou(C)    등록일   2022-01-19
   작성내용
  So Rachel and Kirsty went up to the huge tree and found the diamad, however, Jack Frost, was guarding it! So Lucy, Kirsty and Rachel decided to distract Jack and get the diamond. The plan worked, and they got the diamond ! Fairy queen put it on her crown, and all the faires had their wings back. So Rachel and Kirsty went back, and just in time, their parents came to take them. I thought about diamond after reading this book. Diamond is pure, because it is only made of carbon. It Is hyyaline, not white. And when you put it out the sunlight, it can make a rainbow color. Like this, diamond is pure and good, so it can symbolize goodness, diamond is the best jewel in the world.
   교정내용
 

So Rachel and Kirsty went up to the huge tree and found the diamond, however, Jack Frost, was guarding it!  So Lucy, Kirsty and Rachel decided to distract Jack and get the diamond. The plan worked, and they got the diamond ! Fairy queen put it on her crown, and all the fairies had their wings back. So Rachel and Kirsty went back just in time, their parents came to take them.  I thought about diamond after reading this book. Diamond is pure, because it is only made of carbon. It Is hyaline, not white.  And when you put it against the sunlight, it can make a rainbow color. Like this, diamond is pure and good, so it can symbolizes goodness, diamond is the best jewel in the world.