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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-01-25
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  A.) Describe your ideal body. Please elaborate your answer. I think there is no standard of ideal body. I think people have to control themselves not to be too fat and not too skinny . B.) Make these sentences into English. 01/24/22) -그들은 내일 나의 주문품들을 보낼 거야. They will send my order thing tomorrow. -그들은 매주 화요일에 쓰레기를 수거한다. They pick up trash every tuesdays. -난 테이블을 치울 거야. I will clean up this table.
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​A.) Describe your ideal body. Please elaborate your answer.

I think there is no standard of ideal body. I think people have to control themselves  not to be too fat and not too skinny .

=> I think there is no standard of the ideal body. I think people have to control themselves not to be too fat and not too skinny.​


 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

01/24/22)

 

-그들은 내일 나의 주문품들을 보낼 거야.

They will send my order thing tomorrow.

=>  They will send my orders tomorrow.

 

-그들은 매주 화요일에 쓰레기를 수거한다.

They pick up trash every tuesdays.

=> They collect garbage every Tuesday.

 

-난 테이블을 치울 거야.

I will clean up this table. 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.