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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2022-01-28
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  BOOK: CORE ENGLISH BASIC (3) A. Describe the most memorable holiday ever. The Chuseok is most memorable to me. Because when I was about 8~9 years old, I visited my grand parent's house, And I slept there for 2days. Of course, we ate a lot of kind of delicious foods too. So I was so fun and happy. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/28/22) -응, 그래서 너무 피곤해.: Yes, So I'm so tired. -너 거기서뭘 했니?: What did you do at there? -엄마를 도와드렸어.:I helped my mom. (THANK YOU SO MUCH)
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A. Describe the most memorable holiday ever.

The Chuseok is most memorable to me. ----> Chuseok is the most memorable ​holiday ​to me ever.​

 

Because when I was about 8~9 years old, I visited my grand parent's house, ----> Because when I was about 8-9 years old, I visited my grandparent's.​

 

And I slept there for 2days. ----> And I slept there for 2 days.​

 

Of course, we ate a lot of kind of delicious foods too. ----> Of course, we ate a lot of delicious food, too.​

 

So I was so fun and happy. ----> So, I was so happy​ and had so much fun.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/28/22)

-응, 그래서 너무 피곤해.

Yes, So I'm so tired. Corrected pattern=> Yes, I was so tired.

 

-너 거기서뭘 했니?

What did you do at there? Corrected pattern=> What did you do there?

 

-엄마를 도와드렸어.

I helped my mom. 

 

You're welcome, Sammy! ​