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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-01-30
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  A.) What can be done to protect handfish? Please elaborate your answer. Threats to handfish are said to include habitat loss, fishing, pollution and invasive species. Among them, habitat loss would be the most severe. Handfish usually live on the seabed dredged by fishermen, which could cause habitat loss. So dragging scallop on the seabed should be prohibited. . B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/28/22) -영화 보러 같이 갈까? Shall we go for a movie together? -아직 결정을 못했어. I have not made a decision yet. -너무 슬픈 영화야. It is a sad movie.
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A.) What can be done to protect handfish? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Threats to handfish are said to include habitat loss, fishing, pollution and invasive species.

Among them, habitat loss would be the most severe.

Handfish usually live on the seabed  dredged by fishermen, which could cause habitat loss.

So dragging scallop on the seabed should be prohibited.  

  . 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/28/22)

 

-영화 보러 같이 갈까?

 Shall we go for a movie together? 

 

-아직 결정을 못했어.

 I have not made a decision yet.  

 

-너무 슬픈 영화야.

 It is a sad movie.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> It’s a tear-jerker.

 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.