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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-28
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  Do you enjoy movies from your own country or other countries more? From which other countries? I enjoyed American movies before but now I prefer to watch Korean movies. That's why I can't adjust myself to the Western ways of living and thinking. Actually, I like to watch documentaries more than movies. Sometimes I miss the time when my husband and I went to movie theater. Both of us liked Action movies like Abatar and Mission Impossible series. We are changed now. We no longer go to the movie theater. It is no longer funny. When Corona virus is gone, we are going to go abroad for a trip. (04/28/21) -난 지금 점심을 먹고 있어. - I am having lunch now. -그때는 삶이 단순했지. - Life was simple then. -넌 곧 명령을 받게 될 거야 - You are going to be ordered soon.
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Do you enjoy movies from your own country or other countries more? From which other countries?

 

I enjoyed American movies before but now I prefer to watch Korean movies. That's why I can't adjust myself to the Western style of living and thinking. Actually, I like to watch documentaries more than movies. Sometimes I miss the time when my husband and I went to the movie theater. Both of us liked Action movies like Abatar Avatar and Mission Impossible series. We are changed now. We no longer go to the movie theater. It is no longer funny. When Corona virus is gone, we are going to go abroad for a trip.

 

(04/28/21)

- 지금 점심을 먹고 있어. - I am having lunch now.

-그때는 삶이 단순했지. - Life was simple then.

- 명령을 받게 거야 - You are going to be ordered soon. -> You will get your orders soon.

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