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   제 목   Would you like to live in New York City?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-02-06
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  A.) Would you like to live in New York City? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answer. I have heard much about New York through various medias, which seems to bore me. So I would not select to live in New York though I have a chance. ✅ B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/04/22) -어떤 영화가 가장 인상 깊었어? What movie is the most impressive to you? -새로운 공포영화는 머리가 쭈뼛쭈뼛 서. The new horror movie makes me scary. -내 친구가 그 영화 죽인다고 하던데. My friend said that the movie is so interesting.
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A.) Would you like to live in New York City? Why or why not? Please elaborate your answer.

 

I have heard much about New York through various medias, which seems to bore me.

So I would not select to live in New York  though I have a chance.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/04/22)

 

-어떤 영화가 가장 인상 깊었어?

 What movie is the most impressive to you? ✅

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-새로운 공포영화는 머리가 쭈뼛쭈뼛 서.

 The new horror movie makes me scary.

 => The new horror movie is hair-raising.


-내 친구가 그 영화 죽인다고 하던데.

 My friend said that the movie is so interesting. ✅​

 

​• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.​