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   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2022-02-07
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  A. Please make two sentences using the word "lose". I lost my money on the betting. The strike cost them thousands of wons in lost business. B. Make these sentences into English. (02/04/22) -어떤 영화가 가장 인상 깊었어? Whish movie was the most impressive? --새로운 공포영화는 머리가 쭈뼛쭈뼛 서. New gorrible movie made my hair stand on my head. -내 친구가 그 영화 죽인다고 하던데. My friend said the movie was awesome. Thank you teacher! !!m (<-rabbit)
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A. Please make two sentences using the word "lose".

I lost my money on the betting.  

 

The strike cost them thousands of wons in lost business.

  =>  The strike costed them thousands of won and lost their business.

  => Corrected : This sentence has been corrected grammatically.

 

B. Make these sentences into English. 

(02/04/22)

-어떤 영화가 가장 인상 깊었어?

Whish movie was the most impressive?

  =>  What movie has impressed you the most?

  => Corrected : This sentence has been corrected grammatically. 


--새로운 공포영화는 머리가 쭈뼛쭈뼛 서.

New gorrible movie made my hair stand on my head.

  =>  The new horror movie is hair-raising.

  => Corrected : This sentence has been corrected grammatically.  

 

-내 친구가 그 영화 죽인다고 하던데.

My friend said the movie was awesome.

  =>  My friend says it's a big hit.

  => Your sentence is correct, but here's another way of saying it. 

 

 Thank you teacher!    !!m (<-rabbit)​ 

No worries, Jessica! Let's talk again soon. ^^ ♥