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   교정강사   Catherine(C)    등록일   2022-02-17
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  A. Why does the Mount Wingen fire burn so slowly? I think the temperature is so hot. B. Make these sentences into English. [Make these sentences into English] (02/15/22) -아직 못 봤어.하지만 나는 조부모님들이랑 같이 가서 원하는 것을 살 거야. -돌돌이는 어디에 있니? 난 아직 사진도 같이 못 찍었는데. -돌돌이가 너를 한 시간 동안 기다렸어. 그런데 돌돌이 아빠가 다른 행사에도 참석 해야한대. 돌돌이는 갔어. -I haven't seen yet. But I will go with my grandparents and buy the thing that I want. -Where is Doldol? I haven't taken picture yet. -Doldol had waited you for 1 hours. But Doldol's father has to participate in other events too. Doldol was gone.
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A. Why does the Mount Wingen fire burn so slowly?

I think the temperature is so hot. ✔

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

[Make these sentences into English]

(02/15/22)

-아직 못 봤어.하지만 나는 조부모님들이랑 같이 가서 원하는 것을 살 거야.

I haven't seen yet. But I will go with my grandparents and buy the thing that I want.​ Corrected pattern=>​ Not yet. But my grandparents and I are going to buy something to want.

 

-돌돌이는 어디에 있니? 난 아직 사진도 같이 못 찍었는데.

Where is Doldol? I haven't taken picture yet. ​Corrected pattern=>​ Where's Doldol? I didn't take a picture with him yet.

 

-돌돌이가 너를 한 시간 동안 기다렸어. 그런데 돌돌이 아빠가 다른 행사에도 참석 해야한대. 돌돌이는 갔어.

Doldol had waited you for 1 hours. But Doldol's father has to participate in other events too. Doldol was gone. Corrected pattern=>​ He waited for you for an hour. But his father has to take part in another ceremony. He's gone.