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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-02-17
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  A.) What does Holocaust Memorial Day mark? Please elaborate your answer. Holocaust refers to the mass murder of Jewish and Gypsies during the Second World War by Nazi. It ended when Russian forces took control of the concentration camps. The date was designated as the Holocaust Memorial Day to mark the liberation. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/16/22) -여기 참 아늑하다. It is very comfortable here. -이곳 분위기 죽이는데. It feels so nice here. -여기 좀 이상한데. It is a little strange here.
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A.) What does Holocaust Memorial Day mark? Please elaborate your answer.

 

Holocaust refers to the mass murder of Jewish and Gypsies during the Second World War by Nazi.

It ended when Russian forces took control  of the concentration camps.

The date was designated as the Holocaust Memorial Day to mark the liberation.

 

=> Holocaust refers to the mass murder of Jews and Gypsies during the Second World War by Nazi.

It ended when Russian forces took control  of the concentration camps.

The date was designated as the Holocaust Memorial Day to mark the liberation.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/16/22)

 

-여기 참 아늑하다.

 It is  very comfortable here.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> It’s so cozy here.

 

-이곳 분위기 죽이는데.

 It feels so nice here.  

-여기 좀 이상한데.

It is a little strange here. 

 

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.