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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2022-02-21
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  HOMEWORK: A. How would you feel if you failed to achieve any of your goals? I have many experiences that I failed my goal. when it happen sometimes I felt sad and unsatisfied. but those made me strong and It helped me get better. B. Make these sentences into English. (02/18/22) -매니저는 나의 제안을 고려해보았다. The manager considered my proposal. -나의 여동생은 콘텍트렌즈를 사용한다. My sister uses a contact lens. -Bob은 차고를 청소하고 있다. Bob is cleaning in the garage.
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​​HOMEWORK:

A. How would you feel if you failed to achieve any of your goals?

I have many experiences that I failed my goal. when it happen sometimes I felt sad and unsatisfied. but those made me strong and It helped me get better.

 

=> Corrected Answer <=

I've had numerous occasions where I've failed to achieve my goals. When this happened, I was sad and unsatisfied. But those experiences strengthened me and helped me improve. 

 

​B. Make these sentences into English.
(02/18/22)
-매니저는 나의 제안을 고려해보았다.
The manager considered my proposal. => Sentence corrected grammatically 
-나의 여동생은 콘텍트렌즈를 사용한다.
My sister uses a contact lens. -> My sister uses contact lenses.
-Bob은 차고를 청소하고 있다.
Bob is cleaning in the garage. -> Bob is cleaning in the garage.​