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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-02-22
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  .) What would happen there were no public schools? Please elaborate your answer. I think many student can't learn proper studies. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/18/22) -매니저는 나의 제안을 고려해보았다. Manager considered my suggestion. -나의 여동생은 콘텍트렌즈를 사용한다. My sister uses contact lens. -Bob은 차고를 청소하고 있다. Bob is cleaning car garage.
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.) What would happen there were no public schools? Please elaborate your answer.

I think many student can't learn proper studies.

 

=> I think many students can't learn proper studies.​

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/18/22)

 

-매니저는 나의 제안을 고려해보았다.

Manager considered my suggestion.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> The manager considered my proposal.


-나의 여동생은 콘텍트렌즈를 사용한다.

My sister uses contact lens.

=> My sister uses contact lenses.


-Bob은 차고를 청소하고 있다.

Bob is cleaning car garage.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> ​Bob is cleaning the car garage.​ 

OR 

=> Bob is cleaning the garage.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.