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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2022-02-23
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  HOMEWORK: A. At what age do people usually retire in your country? At private company, like samsung, LG, get employees out when they can't make performance. but public company, established by government and officials, they can work until 60 which is guaranteed by laws. B. Make these sentences into English. (02/23/22) -난 그 의식행사에서 저 귀걸이를 할 거야. I will wear those earrings at the ceremony. -그는 자기 돈에 대해서 신경 쓴다. He cares about his money. -그 노동자들은 내일 공지를 받을 거야. The notice will be announced to the workers tomorrow.
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HOMEWORK:

A. At what age do people usually retire in your country?

At private company, like Samsung, LG, get employees out when they can't make performance. but public company, established by government and officials, they can work until 60 which is guaranteed by laws.

Corrections:

When employees are unable to perform for a private company, such as Samsung or LG, they are fired. However, public companies, which are founded by the government and authorities, are allowed to work until they reach the age of 60, as stipulated by law.

B. Make these sentences into English.

(02/23/22)

-난 그 의식행사에서 저 귀걸이를 할 거야.

I will wear those earrings at the ceremony. => Sentence Corrected Grammatically <=

-그는 자기 돈에 대해서 신경 쓴다.

He cares about his money. => Sentence Corrected Grammatically <=

-그 노동자들은 내일 공지를 받을 거야.

The notice will be announced to the workers tomorrow. -> The workers will receive the notice tomorrow.