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   교정강사   Arah(C)    등록일   2022-02-24
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  Dear Arah Teacher, Hello! I'm Daniel Cho. The following are the answers to the question in February 23rd. A. If you were a song, what song would you be and why? I would be a conscious rap. Because I prefer rappers who talk about their biographies and some social issues to rappers who talk about their brilliant life. B. Make these sentences into English: (02/23/22) -기다려, 내가 가서 사 올게. Hold on, let me go to buy it. -아냐, 같이 가자. No, let's go together. -사람들이 줄을 서 있어. The people are lined up. That's all I have for you today. See you in February 25th! Sincerely, Daniel Cho
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Hi, Daniel! :) 

 

A. If you were a song, what song would you be and why?

I would be a conscious rap. 

Because I prefer rappers who talk about their biographies and some social issues to of rappers who talk about their brilliant life.

 

B. Make these sentences into English:

(02/23/22)

-기다려, 내가 가서 사 올게.

Hold on, let me go to buy it. -> Wait for me. I'll go and buy them.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

-아냐, 같이 가자.

No, let's go together. 

-사람들이 줄을 서 있어.

The people are lined up. -> People are standing in a line.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.