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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-02-24
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  A. Write about a nightmare you've had. In my dream, I was on the grass. I found the a paper bad and I opened it. Suddenly, it turned dark and I heard a bad beep under my feet. So I touches my feet, I caught someone's head. That time the light went on and I made my eye contact with her. B. Make these sentences into English. (02/24/22) -전데요. -안녕 덕보야, 나 돌돌이야.너 지금 뭐하고 있니? -나 지금 점심 먹어. 무슨 일이니? -It's me. -Hi Deokbp, This is Doldol. What are you doing now? -I'm having lunch now. What's the matter?
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A. Write about a nightmare you've had.

In my dream, I was on the grass. (Correct)

I found the a paper bad and I opened it. --> I found a paper and I opened it.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

Suddenly, it turned dark and I heard a bad beep under my feet. (Correct)

 

So I touches my feet, I caught someone's head. --> So, I touched my feet and I caught someone's head.

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

That time the light went on and I made my eye contact with her. (Correct)

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(02/24/22)

 

-전데요.

-안녕 덕보야, 나 돌돌이야.너 지금 뭐하고 있니?

-나 지금 점심 먹어. 무슨 일이니?

-It's me. (Correct)

 

-Hi Deokbp, This is Doldol. What are you doing now? (Correct)

 

-I'm having lunch now. What's the matter?  (Correct)