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   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-04-29
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  HOMEWORK: A. Do you think it is important to wear fashionable clothes? => I don't think so. Because i think i just need to dress clean. -안녕, 심순아! 이 아이는 내친구 소라야. 그리고 여기는 심순이야. => Hi, Simsun,This is my friend Sora. and This is Simsun. -만나서 반가워, 심순아.=> Nice to meet you, Simsun. -나도 만나서 반가워 소라야. Nice to meet you,too,Sora.
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 A. Do you think it is important to wear fashionable clothes?

 

=> I don't think so. Because i think i just need to dress clean.=> I don't think so. I think I should just wear clean clothes.

 

 

-안녕, 심순아! 이 아이는 내친구 소라야.그리고 여기는 심순이야. => Hi, Simsun,This is my friend Sora. and This is Simsun.

=> Hi, Simsoon! This is my friend, Sora. And this is Simsoon.   => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

 

-만나서 반가워, 심순아.=> Nice to meet you, Simsun. => Nice to meet you, Simsoon.  (correct)

 

 

-나도 만나서 반가워 소라야. Nice to meet you ,too, Sora. (correct)

 

 

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