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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-03-01
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  A.) What are some of the common misuse of cell phones? Please elaborate your answer. I think many people watch youtube just for killing time. They can do some other things on that time, but they don't do because of smart phones. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/28/22) -그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다. She thanked for securties. -넌 여기에 머물러 있어. you must stay here -내가 (답장) 할 수 있게 되자마자 답장할게. I will response you if I can do.
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A.) What are some of the common misuse of cell phones? Please elaborate your answer.

 

I think many people watch youtube just for killing time. They can do some other things on that time, but they don't do because of smart phones.

=> I think many people watch YouTube just for killing time. They can do some other things at that time, but they don't do, because of smart phones.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/28/22)

 

-그녀는 구조대원들에게 감사를 표시했다.

She thanked for securties. (securities) 

=> She thanked the rescuers.


-넌 여기에 머물러 있어.

you must stay here

=> You must stay here​.

 

 

-내가 (답장) 할 수 있게 되자마자 답장할게.

I will response you if I can do.​ 

=> I will reply as soon as I can.


• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.