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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-30
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  My husband didn't go to his office today. He said, he didn't have translation job today. So we went to the lake and walked around in the afternoon. The water was clean and I saw one duck swimming. There were several ducks on the water before. I didn't know where they were gone. We sat down on the bench and ate kimbab and sandwiches for lunch. We have been married for 27 years. We were just looking at the water and he watched Youtube on his smartphone. We knew each other very well, so we didn't need to talk a lot. What I mean is even though I don't say something, he already knows that. So when we are together, we are not talkative. Bye
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My husband didn't go to his office today. He said, he didn't have any translation job today. So, we went to the lake and walked around in the afternoon. The water was clean and I saw one duck swimming. There were several ducks in the water before. I didn't know they were gone. We sat down on the bench and ate kimbab and sandwiches for lunch. We have been married for 27 years. We were just looking at the water and he watched YouTube on his smart phone. We knew each other very well, so we didn't need to talk a lot. What I mean is, even though I don't say anything, he already knows that. So, when we are together, we don’t talk a lot. Bye